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Showing posts with label H1. Show all posts
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Wednesday, December 30, 2009

Being Interested In The Lecturer for H1

Once you know the details about H1 criteria (see Marking Scheme for Humanities, Marking Scheme - Creative Arts and Science, Detailed Reasoning, Mindmap, New Video, Essay Requirements), you should be interested in the lecturer and be interested in him or her anyway, symbolised by placing a dot in a circle, e.g.


Structure of a Paragraph

Each of the five paragraphs in the exposition and each of the five paragraphs in the critique should be composed of three parts, which are described as follows.
  1. Example, e.g. "The astronaut slept in the sleeping bag".
  2. Algorithm, e.g. "The astronaut took the sleeping bag out of it's bag, slept in it, then put it back into it's bag".
  3. Comment, e.g. "This helped him to concentrate on the Space Industry".

Tuesday, September 22, 2009

New Video




The following items are in this video:

1. Ideas - As an exercise, think of two uses, a future use and two types for each object.
2. Breasoning - Think of the x, y, z dimensions and colour of each object.
3. Rebreasoning - Think of the fact that the person and the object in a sentence are connected by a verb (an action) that means they touch.
4. Breathsoning - Think of a reason that the object is good.
5. Rebreathsoning - Think of a reason that the verb (action) is done well.
6. Space - Think of spatial characteristics of the person in relation to the object.
7. Time - Think of temporal characteristics of the person in relation to the object.

See also:

1. Structure of a Paragraph - Think of a reason, its manifestation and a link to the main conclusion.
2. Test Links Using Control of Body, Money and Computers - Think of how the object is controlled by the body, how much the object costs and how the object functions can be used to think of a link between the reason and the main conclusion.
3. Mindmap - Brainstorm or "mind-map" ideas for your essay.
4. Learn how essays are graded, in terms of making distinctions between objects, in:
1. Marking Scheme - Humanities
2. Marking Scheme - Creative Arts and Science - Creative Arts and Science
5. Detailed Reasoning - Each reason in the essay should be checked using this technique for ample marks.
6. Essay Requirements - One may be awarded a certain grade based on the content of the essay.

Thursday, July 30, 2009

Time

a. What happened before the event?

where apple = 6x6x6 cm, shopping bag = 30x10x40 cm.

b. How long will the event take?

where apple = 6x6x6 cm

c. What will happen after the event?



where apple core = 1x1x6 cm, bin = 20x20x20 cm

Space

a. Which room is the proposition set in?

where dining room = 10x5x5 m

b. Which part of the room is it set in?

where chair = 0.5x0.5x0.5 m

c. Which direction is the person facing?


where dinner plate = 20x20x5 cm

Saturday, July 25, 2009

Rebreathsoning

Think of an adverb (called a "rebreathsoning"), which is a human judgement for each verb. For example, describe "John ate the apple" (6x6x6 cm) with "ravenously".


Breathsoning

Think of an adjective (a "breathsoning"), which is a human judgement for each noun. For example, describe an apple as "delicious".




where apple = 6x6x6 cm

Saturday, March 28, 2009

Rebreasoning

There should be a chain of breasoned objects interacting to ensure the flow of the essay or story. Think of the way two objects touch when they are mentioned together.
a. Think of the fact the two objects touch.
b. Do either of the objects change size?
c. Do either of the objects change colour?
These are known as the "rebreasoning" rules.


where apple = 6x6x6 cm

When you think of the action's properties, you will think of the action's specific name.

Wednesday, March 25, 2009

Marking Scheme - Creative Arts

The following marking scheme for creative arts and science SHOULD NOT be used (but currently is used, even though it implies agreement and disagreement deserve different marks).

H1 and H2A essays have breasoning, and rebreasoning completed as part of them.
a. H1 or 80-100%
An essay is given this mark if the student writes on a positive theme. The story is about five objects related to the setting.
i. 90% essays have breathsoning and rebreathsoning completed as part of them.
ii. 100% essays have space and time tests completed as part of them.
b. H2A or 75-79%
An essay is given this mark if the student writes on a different theme. The story is about five objects related to the setting.
c. H2B or 70-74%
An essay is given this mark if the student writes on a different theme. The story is about five objects related to the setting. The objects are breasoned.
d. H3 or 65-69%
An essay is given this mark if the student writes on a positive theme. The story is about five objects related to the setting. The objects are breasoned.
e. P or 50-64%
An essay is given this mark if the student writes on a positive theme.
f. N or 0-49%
An essay is given this mark if the student writes on a different theme.


To earn A (80%), one should write 85 reasons using the breasoning rules (5 exposition + 5 critique + 25 detailed reasoning + 50 mind map), to earn A+, one should write 130 reasons (for each of 10 reasons per essay, 9 reasons support them, and 2 breasoned breathsonings and 1 breasoned rebreathsoning reasons support the original reason), to earn 100%, one should write 190 reasons ( or each of 10 reasons per essay, 9 reasons support them, 2 breasoned breathsonings and 1 breasoned rebreathsoning reasons support the original reason and 3 space tests and 3 time tests beasonings support the original reason). Rarely, 250 breasonings, which earn 100% are universally recognised as supporting the spiritual imagery of a production. See Tables 1-2 below.

Table 1. Number of breasonings required for A+ using current system.

For each of (5 reasons in exposition + 5 reasons in critique =) 10 reasons per essay:Breasoning for reason 1 for reason n.Breasoning for Breathsoning for subject noun in reason n.Maximum A+ = 90 for 130 breasonings (range from 80.1%-90% is 86-130 breasonings).

Breasoning for reason 2 for reason n.Breasoning for Breathsoning for object noun in reason n.

Breasoning for reason 3 for reason n.Breasoning for Rebreathsoning for Verb in reason n.

Breasoning for reason 4 for reason n.


Breasoning for reason 5 for reason n.


Breasoning for reason 6 for reason n.


Breasoning for reason 7 for reason n.


Breasoning for reason 8 for reason n.


Breasoning for reason 9 for reason n.


Table 2. Number of breasonings required for 100% using current system.

For each of (5 reasons in exposition + 5 reasons in critique =) 10 reasons per essay:Breasoning for reason 1 for reason n.Breasoning for Breathsoning for subject noun in reason n.Maximum 100% = 190 breasonings (range from 90.1%-100% is 131-190 breasonings).

Breasoning for reason 2 for reason n.Breasoning for Breathsoning for object noun in reason n.

Breasoning for reason 3 for reason n.Breasoning for Rebreathsoning for Verb in reason n.

Breasoning for reason 4 for reason n.Space Test: Breasoning for room in reason n.

Breasoning for reason 5 for reason n.Space Test: Breasoning for part of room in reason n.

Breasoning for reason 6 for reason n.Space Test: Breasoning for direction in room in reason n.

Breasoning for reason 7 for reason n.Time Test: Breasoning for time to prepare for action in reason n.

Breasoning for reason 8 for reason n.Time Test: Breasoning for time to do action in reason n.

Breasoning for reason 9 for reason n.Time Test: Breasoning for time to finish action in reason n.

The following marking scheme SHOULD be used (because it gives agreement and disagreement the same mark):

H1 and H2A essays have breasoning, and rebreasoning completed as part of them.
a. A or 75-100%
An essay is given this mark if the student writes on a positive or negative (with examples of how a positive thing shouldn't go wrong) theme. The story is about five objects related to the setting.
i. A+ (87.5%) essays have breathsoning and rebreathsoning completed as part of them.
ii. 100% essays have space and time tests completed as part of them.

b. B or 65-74%
An essay is given this mark if the student writes on a positive or negative theme. The story is about five objects related to the setting. The objects are breasoned.

c. P or 50-64%
An essay is given this mark if the student writes on a positive or negative theme.

d. N or 0-49%
An essay is given this mark if the student doesn't answer the question.

See * above.

To earn A (75%), one should write 85 reasons using the breasoning rules (5 exposition + 5 critique + 25 detailed reasoning + 50 mind map), to earn A+, one should write 130 reasons (for each of 10 reasons per essay, 9 reasons support them, and 2 breasoned breathsonings and 1 breasoned rebreathsoning reasons support the original reason), to earn 100%, one should write 190 reasons ( or each of 10 reasons per essay, 9 reasons support them, 2 breasoned breathsonings and 1 breasoned rebreathsoning reasons support the original reason and 3 space tests and 3 time tests beasonings support the original reason). Rarely, 250 breasonings, which earn 100% are universally recognised as supporting the spiritual imagery of a production. See Tables 3-4 below.

Table 3. Number of breasonings required for A+ using suggested equitable system.

For each of (5 reasons in exposition + 5 reasons in critique =) 10 reasons per essay: Breasoning for reason 1 for reason n. Breasoning for Breathsoning for subject noun in reason n. Maximum A+ = 87.5 for 130 breasonings (range from 75.1%-87.5% is 86-130 breasonings).


Breasoning for reason 2 for reason n. Breasoning for Breathsoning for object noun in reason n.


Breasoning for reason 3 for reason n. Breasoning for Rebreathsoning for Verb in reason n.


Breasoning for reason 4 for reason n.





Breasoning for reason 5 for reason n.





Breasoning for reason 6 for reason n.





Breasoning for reason 7 for reason n.





Breasoning for reason 8 for reason n.





Breasoning for reason 9 for reason n.




Table 4. Number of breasonings required for 100% using suggested equitable system.

For each of (5 reasons in exposition + 5 reasons in critique =) 10 reasons per essay: Breasoning for reason 1 for reason n. Breasoning for Breathsoning for subject noun in reason n. Maximum 100% = 190 breasonings (range from 87.6%-100% is 131-190 breasonings).


Breasoning for reason 2 for reason n. Breasoning for Breathsoning for object noun in reason n.


Breasoning for reason 3 for reason n. Breasoning for Rebreathsoning for Verb in reason n.


Breasoning for reason 4 for reason n. Space Test: Breasoning for room in reason n.


Breasoning for reason 5 for reason n. Space Test: Breasoning for part of room in reason n.


Breasoning for reason 6 for reason n. Space Test: Breasoning for direction in room in reason n.


Breasoning for reason 7 for reason n. Time Test: Breasoning for time to prepare for action in reason n.


Breasoning for reason 8 for reason n. Time Test: Breasoning for time to do action in reason n.


Breasoning for reason 9 for reason n. Time Test: Breasoning for time to finish action in reason n.



On my blog, I wrote after conferring with the Melbourne University Vice Chancellor Glyn Davis that agreement and disagreement equitably deserve the same grade. Later, the University may institute this change. Teachers and lecturers may recalculate the equitable grade by modifying the current system's grade (see Table 5.) or counting breasonings written down as part of a computational marking scheme.

Table 5. Conversion table from old marking scheme to new equitable marking scheme

Current marking scheme grade letter Current marking scheme Number of breasonings in current marking scheme New equitable marking scheme grade letter New equitable marking scheme Number of breasonings in new equitable marking scheme
A++ 90.1-100% 131-190 A++ 87.6-100% 131-190
A+ 80.1-90% 86-130 A+ 75.1-87.5% 86-130
H1 or A 80.00% 85 A 75.00% (ranges from 75-79% or 80-80% in current marking scheme) 85
H2A 75-79% 85

H2B 70-74% 70-84 B 65-74% (ranges from 65-69% or 70-74% in current marking scheme) 65-84
H3 65-69% 65-69

P 50-64% 50-64 P 50-64% 50-64
N 0-49% 0-49 N 0-49% 0-49

Tuesday, March 3, 2009

Essay Requirements

Think of positive ideas about an idea, and some differing from it, as follows:
Opinionative essays:
H1*:
a. Agree (in exposition) - Write an exposition of the text in the first half of the essay.
b. Agree (critique) - Write that the text is a good idea.
c. Differ - Think of a critique which argues against the text in the second half of the essay, one of the five paragraphs could be e.g. The astronaut tripped over the sleeping bag. This happened when he tried to put it away, but it wouldn't fit, and he tripped over it when he walked past. This meant he couldn't concentrate on the space industry.
d. Agree - Write that the text is a good idea in the end.
H2A*:
a. Agree (in exposition) - as for above, etc.
b. Differ (critique)
c. Agree
* Please check with your lecturer whether the H1 for a particular assignment is based on agreeing or disagreeing with the text.
Creative arts or science:
H1:
a. Positive (in exposition) - Write down a story on a positive theme.
b. Agree (critique) - In Masters one must write, otherwise think of a critique that agrees with the story.
c. Differ - Think of a critique that differs from the story.
d. Agree - Think of a critique that agrees with the story in the end.
OR
a. Positive (in exposition) - as for above, etc.
b. Differ (critique)
c. Agree
H2A:
a. Different (in exposition) - Write down a story on a different (negative) theme.
b. Agree (critique) - as for above.
c. Differ
d. Agree
OR
a. Different (in exposition)
b. Differ (critique)
c. Agree

Sections in the assignment should be illustrated using the method described in “Breasoning”.

Monday, August 4, 2008

Mindmap

Mindmap 30 (500 word essay) or 50 (2000 word essay) reasons from different departments for your argument.

Ideas

The following ideas should be represented in high quality work.

1. Two uses
a->b, a->c
Include two uses or ideas about an idea from your essay. For example, John (0.5m, 0.3m, 1.8m) ate an apple (0.6m, 0.6m, 0.6m) has the two uses John (see previous dimensions) planted the seed (0.005m, 0.0025m, 0.0025m) and John stepped over the line (0.5m, 0.01m, 0.0001m).

2. Future
a->b
Think about how one of your ideas relates to the future. For example, a student should learn to read a sign (0.3m, 0.6m, 2m) so he can step over a crack (0.5m, 0.01m, 0.005m).

3. Two types
a->b, c->b
Think about how two objects are co-ordinated in relation to each other. For example, Luke ate the wheat biscuit (0.1m, 0.05m, 0.01m), which was softened by milk, which was constituted by the wheat biscuit (0.1m, 0.05m, 0.01m) and the glass of milk (0.05m, 0.05m, 0.15m).

Wednesday, June 25, 2008

Detailed Reasoning

Think of a five-level chain of reasons, and the inferences from one to another for each of the reasons in your essay.

When agreeing with the writer, write the five reasons in the following order (for each, describe how food can be found):
1. Economics
2. Engineering
3. Arts
4. Music
5. Morality

When differing in opinion from the writer, write the reasons in the following order:
1. Biology (as for agreeing with the writer, i.e. how food can be found, until Medicine, see below.)
2. Economics
3. Engineering
4. Medicine
5. Morality (how a person may enter into different circumstances, e.g. trip over).

Monday, February 4, 2008

Breasoning

Pray for the breasoning, then think of the x, y and z dimensions, and the colour of each object (their "breasonings").


When you think of the object's properties, you will think of the object's specific name.

See also Professor Algorithm - Use your ability to hone breasonings for H1s.

Creating original philosophy with help only from God: Also, to visualise imagery of a quality necessary to God, think of objects that appear normally, as part of an argument, inside a square.  There are sub squares for the verb for the object, uses and algorithmic objects for use with the object.

Be God: In addition, this square is necessary to think of with you as God.



Sunday, February 3, 2008

Marking Scheme - Humanities and Science

The following is the marking scheme for humanities which SHOULD NOT be used (but currently is used, even though it implies agreement and disagreement deserve different marks):

H1 and H2A essays must have breasoned objects and rebreasoned actions completed as part of them.

1. H1 or 80-100%
An essay is given this mark if the student agrees with the side of the contention agreeing with the writer. An exposition in the first half and critique (agreeing with it) in the second half are required. An exposition is a paraphrasing of the text. A critique is an argument about the text in five paragraphs.
i. 90% essays must have breathsoning and rebreathsoning completed as part of them.
ii. 100% essays must have space and time tests completed as part of them.

2. H2A or 75-79%
An essay is given this mark if the student differs in opinion from the side of the contention agreeing with the writer. An exposition in the first half and critique (differing in opinion from it) in the second half are required.

3. H2B or 70-74%
An essay is given this mark if the student differs in opinion from the side of the contention agreeing with the writer.
An exposition in the first half and critique (differing in opinion from it) in the second half are required. The objects must be breasoned.

4. H3 or 65-69%
An essay is given this mark if the student agrees with the writer in an organised way.
An exposition in five paragraphs is required. The objects must be breasoned.

5. P or 50-64%
An essay is given this mark if the student agrees with the writer.
An exposition in a number of paragraphs other than five is required.

6. N or 0-49%
An essay is given this mark if the student differs in opinion from the writer in the first half or answers another question.
A critique in any number of paragraphs is required.

To earn A (80%), one should write 85 reasons using the breasoning rules (5 exposition + 5 critique + 25 detailed reasoning + 50 mind map), to earn A+, one should write 130 reasons (for each of 10 reasons per essay, 9 reasons support them, and 2 breasoned breathsonings and 1 breasoned rebreathsoning reasons support the original reason), to earn 100%, one should write 190 reasons ( or each of 10 reasons per essay, 9 reasons support them, 2 breasoned breathsonings and 1 breasoned rebreathsoning reasons support the original reason and 3 space tests and 3 time tests beasonings support the original reason). Rarely, 250 breasonings, which earn 100% are universally recognised as supporting the spiritual imagery of a production. See Tables 1-2 below.

Table 1. Number of breasonings required for A+ using current system.

For each of (5 reasons in exposition + 5 reasons in critique =) 10 reasons per essay: Breasoning for reason 1 for reason n. Breasoning for Breathsoning for subject noun in reason n. Maximum A+ = 90 for 130 breasonings (range from 80.1%-90% is 86-130 breasonings).


Breasoning for reason 2 for reason n. Breasoning for Breathsoning for object noun in reason n.


Breasoning for reason 3 for reason n. Breasoning for Rebreathsoning for Verb in reason n.


Breasoning for reason 4 for reason n.





Breasoning for reason 5 for reason n.





Breasoning for reason 6 for reason n.





Breasoning for reason 7 for reason n.





Breasoning for reason 8 for reason n.





Breasoning for reason 9 for reason n.




Table 2. Number of breasonings required for 100% using current system.

For each of (5 reasons in exposition + 5 reasons in critique =) 10 reasons per essay: Breasoning for reason 1 for reason n. Breasoning for Breathsoning for subject noun in reason n. Maximum 100% = 190 breasonings (range from 90.1%-100% is 131-190 breasonings).


Breasoning for reason 2 for reason n. Breasoning for Breathsoning for object noun in reason n.


Breasoning for reason 3 for reason n. Breasoning for Rebreathsoning for Verb in reason n.


Breasoning for reason 4 for reason n. Space Test: Breasoning for room in reason n.


Breasoning for reason 5 for reason n. Space Test: Breasoning for part of room in reason n.


Breasoning for reason 6 for reason n. Space Test: Breasoning for direction in room in reason n.


Breasoning for reason 7 for reason n. Time Test: Breasoning for time to prepare for action in reason n.


Breasoning for reason 8 for reason n. Time Test: Breasoning for time to do action in reason n.


Breasoning for reason 9 for reason n. Time Test: Breasoning for time to finish action in reason n.




The following marking scheme for humanities SHOULD be used (because it gives agreement and disagreement the same mark):

H1 and H2A essays must have breasoned objects and rebreasoned completed as part of them.

1. A or 75-100%
An essay is given this mark if the student either agrees with or disagrees with the side of the contention agreeing with the writer, regardless. An exposition in the first half and critique in the second half are required. An exposition is a paraphrasing of the text. A critique is an argument about the text in five paragraphs.
i. A+ (87.5%) essays must have breathsoning and rebreathsoning completed as part of them.
ii. 100% essays must have space and time tests completed as part of them.

2. B or 65-74%
An essay is given this mark if the student agrees or differs in opinion from the side of the contention agreeing with the writer, regardless.
An exposition in the first half and critique (differing in opinion from it) in the second half are required. The objects must be breasoned.

3. C or 50-64%
An essay is given this mark if the student agrees or disagrees with the writer, regardless.
An exposition in a number of paragraphs other than five is required.

4. N or 0-49%
An essay is given this mark if the student doesn't answer the question.
A critique in any number of paragraphs is required.


To earn A (75%), one should write 85 reasons using the breasoning rules (5 exposition + 5 critique + 25 detailed reasoning + 50 mind map), to earn A+, one should write 130 reasons (for each of 10 reasons per essay, 9 reasons support them, and 2 breasoned breathsonings and 1 breasoned rebreathsoning reasons support the original reason), to earn 100%, one should write 190 reasons ( or each of 10 reasons per essay, 9 reasons support them, 2 breasoned breathsonings and 1 breasoned rebreathsoning reasons support the original reason and 3 space tests and 3 time tests beasonings support the original reason). Rarely, 250 breasonings, which earn 100% are universally recognised as supporting the spiritual imagery of a production. See Tables 3-4 below.

Table 3. Number of breasonings required for A+ using suggested equitable system.

For each of (5 reasons in exposition + 5 reasons in critique =) 10 reasons per essay: Breasoning for reason 1 for reason n. Breasoning for Breathsoning for subject noun in reason n. Maximum A+ = 87.5 for 130 breasonings (range from 75.1%-87.5% is 86-130 breasonings).


Breasoning for reason 2 for reason n. Breasoning for Breathsoning for object noun in reason n.


Breasoning for reason 3 for reason n. Breasoning for Rebreathsoning for Verb in reason n.


Breasoning for reason 4 for reason n.





Breasoning for reason 5 for reason n.





Breasoning for reason 6 for reason n.





Breasoning for reason 7 for reason n.





Breasoning for reason 8 for reason n.





Breasoning for reason 9 for reason n.




Table 4. Number of breasonings required for 100% using suggested equitable system.

For each of (5 reasons in exposition + 5 reasons in critique =) 10 reasons per essay: Breasoning for reason 1 for reason n. Breasoning for Breathsoning for subject noun in reason n. Maximum 100% = 190 breasonings (range from 87.6%-100% is 131-190 breasonings).


Breasoning for reason 2 for reason n. Breasoning for Breathsoning for object noun in reason n.


Breasoning for reason 3 for reason n. Breasoning for Rebreathsoning for Verb in reason n.


Breasoning for reason 4 for reason n. Space Test: Breasoning for room in reason n.


Breasoning for reason 5 for reason n. Space Test: Breasoning for part of room in reason n.


Breasoning for reason 6 for reason n. Space Test: Breasoning for direction in room in reason n.


Breasoning for reason 7 for reason n. Time Test: Breasoning for time to prepare for action in reason n.


Breasoning for reason 8 for reason n. Time Test: Breasoning for time to do action in reason n.


Breasoning for reason 9 for reason n. Time Test: Breasoning for time to finish action in reason n.



On my blog, I wrote after conferring with the Melbourne University Vice Chancellor Glyn Davis that agreement and disagreement equitably deserve the same grade. Later, the University may institute this change. Teachers and lecturers may recalculate the equitable grade by modifying the current system's grade (see Table 5.) or counting breasonings written down as part of a computational marking scheme.

Table 5. Conversion table from old marking scheme to new equitable marking scheme

Current marking scheme grade letterCurrent marking schemeNumber of breasonings in current marking schemeNew equitable marking scheme grade letterNew equitable marking schemeNumber of breasonings in new equitable marking scheme
A++90.1-100%131-190A++87.6-100%131-190
A+80.1-90%86-130A+75.1-87.5%86-130
H1 or A80.00%85A75.00% (ranges from 75-79% or 80-80% in current marking scheme)85
H2A75-79%85
H2B70-74%70-84B65-74% (ranges from 65-69% or 70-74% in current marking scheme)65-84
H365-69%65-69
P50-64%50-64P50-64%50-64
N0-49%0-49N0-49%0-49